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Unlooped since 2009
Unlooped since 2009
1:06 PM
Posted by Stan Schlueter
I started writing this poem about something superficial knowing that deeper and better things usually pour out once you open the poetic dam! When I don't have anything to write about but feel like writing I find poetry opens it up.
Hope you enjoy!
Long and coarse, brown and itchy
A stand of trees, so to speak
On the point, close to the edge
Difficult to find your way
Through the shit and through the itch
It's raw, it's dry, an open sore
Scratch, monkey! It feels so good
Shave you off, be gone from me
Clean cut wounds are better still
Drag you out, behind my truck
Bleeding, you scream my name
Open mind with closed up wounds
Open window see the view
Pick it, monkey! Chains let loose
Deep thoughts, concerning nothing
Grasp for depth, no depth be found
The itch is back, dance, monkey!
Walking wounded, by myself
Clean cuts are nice, softer still
Stay clear, this monkey throws shit
The wounds are mine, leave me be
March 31, 2008 at 8:44 PM
I can't say I would have chosen to write about shaving my pubes, but I think it works (Haven't you been chafing?)
April 8, 2008 at 2:59 PM
Ironically, as I was reading your poem I was listening to a song called "wounded" simultaneously. There was even a reference to a "monkey on her back." Anyway, I enjoy reading your stuff and I love you till the end of time!!!! Come home to me... ALAIWY